I tried it with F sharp
Almost close
A bit of high treble
And that’s it
But does it have that layer
Rather it became
A shrill from those childhood obstinacy
Or of a professional mourner
No it should have G minor
Because G minor can hold that extra moist
Or G minor can have that soaked feel
Yes the adult mind needs minor notes
So we are ready with all minor notes
To denote the adult mind’s expression
With very occasional sharp chords
Yelling out the torment
It’s looking flawless now
According to pitch perfect
Carrying all Barri tone basic pain
And soprano catharsis optimum
But in vain
Yet there was not born a single drop
To put life to this glorious hue of cry
That did the rain
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